Hello Readers,
Welcome to the world of 55 Fiction : Fragments of Imagination in 55 words ONLY.
My critic, Mr. Sushobhan Roy welcomed me to the world of 55 Fiction.At face value, it appeared to be a cheese cake,but while writing it,I always exceeded the limit.First it was 69,then 61,and then it got complicated.Had to rework a couple of times and it got even more challenging.Torn between imagination and word limit,I tried helplessly.Sometimes it was 59...sometimes 57...56...again 58 and finally it zeroed down to 55.
Couldn't ever imagine I would be writing a story in just 55 words,but...Impossible is Nothing.
Onwards,I'll be naming all posts in this category as "55 Fiction # serial no : Post Name"
Please give me your honest feedbacks....hope you like it :-)
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"Which ones are we riding Shashank ? You've got some pretty horses in here!"
- "This one's Yours and that one's Mine.I'll be riding Yours and you'll be riding Mine."
"Stop flirting Shashank,how is that possible?"
-"Juhi, I named this as 'Yours',and that as 'Mine'.So, i'll be riding 'Yours' and you'll ride 'Mine'."
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cute one...but too short yaar......
ReplyDeleteThat's 55 fiction.Someone found a story in 55 words as cute.
ReplyDeleteThanks JD
I thought that now it has began right way but before i started to think "Kahani khatam"
ReplyDeleteTu gadhi ki gadhi hi rahegi
ReplyDeletenice ..:) The way u played with the words was fabulous and the double-entendre part was beautifully brought out.. :)
ReplyDeletewat can i say, the 1st time i have come across something like 55Fiction :)
ReplyDeleteI think very honestly, Very Well Done!!!
ReplyDeleteI just loved the pun played. Very intelligent writing, must say... One of your Best!!! Now, you would ask, "Why so.." To that, I would say, it was clean, simple, interesting without any jargons and unnecessary usage of bombastic words.Now, my quota of 55 words are over!!!